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that is a very professional work, splinters! veeery nicely done. Big respect!
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A question for you Splinters.
Do you have to be careful as to which colors you use and how bright they are or how intense they are.
Being that your material is printed is there any special considerations you have to be aware of?
Do you have to be careful as to which colors you use and how bright they are or how intense they are.
Being that your material is printed is there any special considerations you have to be aware of?
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Yes and no. I no longer have these printed; they are available in epub format on ibooks and barnes and nobles nook store as well as from lulu.
However, because i am using a laptop, i have to proof the books on an ipad to check the colours and contrast etc. as some can look quite a bit different. My experiences with lulu as a publisher in print form have been a bit hit and miss.
However, because i am using a laptop, i have to proof the books on an ipad to check the colours and contrast etc. as some can look quite a bit different. My experiences with lulu as a publisher in print form have been a bit hit and miss.
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Splinters earlier you said that you model your figures for the use of a still image.
Does this mean that you do not do any rigging on your characters and each time you want a new pose you have to model the arm or any other body part in a different angle to show this?
Does this mean that you do not do any rigging on your characters and each time you want a new pose you have to model the arm or any other body part in a different angle to show this?
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Exactly.
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Holly smokes batman...
Let me ask you, what software are you using to model/render in.
I may be able to help you.
Let me ask you, what software are you using to model/render in.
I may be able to help you.
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I'm fine mate...just my way of working.
As for software...need you ask?
As for software...need you ask?
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Very fine work as usual, it's great to see your stuff again, not much I can offer in the way of C&C in your images since they're all spot on
I'm not sure if you've spotted it but there's a bit of a typo. Page 32, "Despite what happened last time and", the space is missing between 'time' and 'and', not sure if you've spotted it. The only other issue I can see is that the star background gets in the way of the words just a little, would it work to fade the background out a bit more? That's not overly critical just me being curious
It's looking very nice, definately want to see more
I'm not sure if you've spotted it but there's a bit of a typo. Page 32, "Despite what happened last time and", the space is missing between 'time' and 'and', not sure if you've spotted it. The only other issue I can see is that the star background gets in the way of the words just a little, would it work to fade the background out a bit more? That's not overly critical just me being curious
It's looking very nice, definately want to see more
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Well guys, its taken me over 10 years but its done.
http://www.lulu.com/product/ebook/deep- ... g/18960340"
Bad news (for me) is this is just one of three books I have planned to tell the whole story.
I'm popping the cork on the wine tonight...its on lulu.com and winging its way to the iBook and Nook store as we speak. Usually shows up in less than a week...
http://www.lulu.com/product/ebook/deep- ... g/18960340"
Bad news (for me) is this is just one of three books I have planned to tell the whole story.
I'm popping the cork on the wine tonight...its on lulu.com and winging its way to the iBook and Nook store as we speak. Usually shows up in less than a week...
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Congrats on the book and finally finishing it! Looks awesome. Now I need an ability to purchase online. 
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Well it can be bought straight from lulu.com or through iTunes. I am also in the process of putting the book into the buddy world website as well as making a flash version of it.
Still lots to do...
Still lots to do...
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Ah yes! I just don't have a credit card.....

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Don't worry mate its a kids book but if curiosity got the better of you, there is always itunes card which you can pick up in most shops. Looks good on iPad; not sure about iphone.
Will give you a shout when its on the website.
Will give you a shout when its on the website.
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Splinters,
As always most awesome work.
Looks like the new computer is serving you well.
Please keep us up to date on any new work I really enjoy seeing your style, it is refreshing.
As always most awesome work.
Looks like the new computer is serving you well.
Please keep us up to date on any new work I really enjoy seeing your style, it is refreshing.
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Yup for the £180 I paid this laptop has been a real workhorse and still going strong. Can't believe how people discard technology when it is no longer 'new'. For what I do this can wipe the floor with some £700+ laptops that are all singing and dancing media machines.
Thanks for the feedback and positive comments. I have Limbo to do now and already plotting out the next two DSD books. Have another Harold in mind and...well, you get the idea...
Thanks for the feedback and positive comments. I have Limbo to do now and already plotting out the next two DSD books. Have another Harold in mind and...well, you get the idea...
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Great news! Good news that Limbo, Harold, and all are still going too.
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That's a very cool shot.
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Thanks, just working on the exterior shot. Not sure how they fit into the story yet but I know she will be flying so they will come in handy.
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The post effects really do some magic in that shot for sure! But i do see jagging with her cuffs on her suit. Is that intentional?
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Nope, need to add a bit of SDS before a fial render. These are vey much WIP's for now.. 
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The cover is looking great!
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Looks great! Pixar should make this into an animated movie 
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I wish....
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Looking Great Man! I love Doris!
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Long life to Doris ! 
Design - illustration - Animation
http://www.crea-vision.fr
http://www.crea-vision.fr
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Already planned out the final book...lets just say things come full circle and Doris has to disguise her rather 'futuristic' looking space craft.
Only one car I know of with 3 wheels here in the UK and something of a joke with us Brits. Lets just say she is 'reliant' on it.
It will just be a cardboard cover so expect a bit of tape and some staples in there as well.
Only one car I know of with 3 wheels here in the UK and something of a joke with us Brits. Lets just say she is 'reliant' on it.
It will just be a cardboard cover so expect a bit of tape and some staples in there as well.
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Is this Doris's car?
Looks very good to me - a tri wheel.
Looks very good to me - a tri wheel.
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See page 12 James, its a cardboard cover that fits over her space craft so no one spots it.
She has another car 'in the future'...again, pink!!
She has another car 'in the future'...again, pink!!
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Heheh cute. I like it splinters. 
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First book had around 80 rendered illustrations....i have two more books to go.
Forgot how much work went into this.......
Forgot how much work went into this.......
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I like it.
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nice car Paul !
Except.... I dont want to drive one of those........ !
Peter
Except.... I dont want to drive one of those........ !
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Dont blame you...not sure how reliable cardboard would be in the rain anyway....
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Really must crack on and finish these books but I just don't seem to have the time nowadays.....Boooooooo
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Still working on this (story mainly) but I got sidetracked promoting the site and writing Limbo (another delayed project).
My goal now is to finish these outstanding projects (two Doris books, Limbo and Bob and Blob) then review the whole thing and tidy up and expand the site as a commercial venture. Yes, I know that is probably the wrong way round...
My goal now is to finish these outstanding projects (two Doris books, Limbo and Bob and Blob) then review the whole thing and tidy up and expand the site as a commercial venture. Yes, I know that is probably the wrong way round...
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Still working on the second book but nearer the finish than the start.....
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I love the work that you do! The book looks amazing. Want to read it all, and is great to see a full blown project done in Truespace. Very encouraging. Thanks for sharing!
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It should be on iTunes before long...the first title is already out there:
https://itunes.apple.com/gb/book/deep-s ... 2878?mt=11"
Thanks for the support
https://itunes.apple.com/gb/book/deep-s ... 2878?mt=11"
Thanks for the support
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Volumetrics, lighting, and colors set the moods. Motion blur on the laser zap picture gives a good action look. Excellent.
The basement dwellers and the dome people is like the Morlocks and the Eloy from The Time Machine. I think your stories are usually more original. Just that idea that is like the old story though.
The basement dwellers and the dome people is like the Morlocks and the Eloy from The Time Machine. I think your stories are usually more original. Just that idea that is like the old story though.
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Pretty sure you can make comparisons between any two stories/films/TV shows. The time machine was the last thing on my mind when writing this. There are lots of influences in there and they are for kids after all 
I always had buck Rodgers in mind actually. As for the age thing, UP would be a great influence to cite if I hadn't written the basic story for this half a decade before that film came out.
I always had buck Rodgers in mind actually. As for the age thing, UP would be a great influence to cite if I hadn't written the basic story for this half a decade before that film came out.
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No one can compare Limbo with Cannibal Women in the Avocado Jungle of Death 
(I remember this as Amazon Women ...)
I didn't mean that you were intentionally copying or basing any of this on it. Rather that your stories' (sp?) elements, or the use of them, are not usually so close to classic or well known ones. Might be good if pieces of these stories remind kids of other stories. That could encourage them to read more.
Agreed, comparisons are easy since many stories will share certain elements. "Pensioner in Spaaaaaace" is found in ... um uh ... some other stories like ... oh uh ... now that is original!
I hope Doris is liked by readers and makes you a ton of money. How are your other books and Buddy World doing?
(I remember this as Amazon Women ...)
I didn't mean that you were intentionally copying or basing any of this on it. Rather that your stories' (sp?) elements, or the use of them, are not usually so close to classic or well known ones. Might be good if pieces of these stories remind kids of other stories. That could encourage them to read more.
Agreed, comparisons are easy since many stories will share certain elements. "Pensioner in Spaaaaaace" is found in ... um uh ... some other stories like ... oh uh ... now that is original!
I hope Doris is liked by readers and makes you a ton of money. How are your other books and Buddy World doing?
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Slow going on the books Finis...i really need to put more effort into marketing.
If you read the whole story i think you would think differently about the H G Wells comparison.
If you read the whole story i think you would think differently about the H G Wells comparison.
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All done and uploaded. ePub is available now and should show up in iTunes/Amazon etc. shortly.
http://www.lulu.com/shop/paul-woodward/ ... 91599.html"
http://www.lulu.com/shop/paul-woodward/ ... 91599.html"
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Wow that cover is amazing!! I love your work, always. How did you do the grass in this one??
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Dribble my friend.
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Splinters Ecrit 'Dribble my friend.'
For a mate shouldn't that be 'Don't Dribble my friend'?
Or more helpfully ' You are drooling good buddy'
Perhaps some auto correcting kicked in unnoticed, maybe 'Draise my friend' was meant?
For a mate shouldn't that be 'Don't Dribble my friend'?
Or more helpfully ' You are drooling good buddy'
Perhaps some auto correcting kicked in unnoticed, maybe 'Draise my friend' was meant?
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I like the city! Don't know what but the mountain under the sky scrapers needs something. It looks too much like dirt. Otherwise great!
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I agree Finis, I will change it late then submit a revision to Apple. Took me 4 hours to get the epub accepted yesterday so don't want to go through that again in a hurry.
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Well, third book is written (although it takes months of tweaks before I am happy with it) but its fleshed out and illustrations are rolling in.
The epilogue is almost exactly the same as the prologue but in a different environment so that was fairly ease to make. Here are a few pages.
The epilogue is almost exactly the same as the prologue but in a different environment so that was fairly ease to make. Here are a few pages.
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looks great Paul ..I like the mood of the renders!

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Oh, I so want one of those vehicles that transform.
Move over Doris! I'm driving!
Superb work as usual!

Move over Doris! I'm driving!
Superb work as usual!
Walk by faith, not by sight.
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Cheers guys. I am off camping for the weekend but I have another 6 weeks of school holiday so I hope to make good progress on this. I was finding that TS was really struggling with some complex renders with volumetrics, HDRI etc. even on an i7 macbook with 1gb graphics and 16gb ram.
Stuck a 500gb EVO SSD in last week and not only does the machine boot in seconds and run buttery smooth....renders are much faster as well.
So, if you are experiencing the same, try a SSD upgrade!!
Stuck a 500gb EVO SSD in last week and not only does the machine boot in seconds and run buttery smooth....renders are much faster as well.
So, if you are experiencing the same, try a SSD upgrade!!
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Its finally done!!!!
Well guys, that's it. After god knows how many years I finally finished the book...or should I say books. It was such a big project that It would have taken decades to complete and I would, no doubt, have given up. But, by making it three books I was able to chip away at it and its done.
DSD is one of my oldest projects with WIP on the very early tS forum.
It feels very strange having finished this and at such a pivotal point in my life where I find myself out of the teaching profession for the first time in 22 years.
I will post a few of the finished pages up for those who have followed this rather long journey...might even be 20 years!
It might not actually be any good as a piece of literature but I stuck to it and completed it.
DSD is one of my oldest projects with WIP on the very early tS forum.
It feels very strange having finished this and at such a pivotal point in my life where I find myself out of the teaching profession for the first time in 22 years.
I will post a few of the finished pages up for those who have followed this rather long journey...might even be 20 years!
It might not actually be any good as a piece of literature but I stuck to it and completed it.
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Oh dear
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Congratulations on the finish Splinters! Actually looks great.
Cudos to you for seeing it through.
As the new year starts... so do the new possibilities buddy. All the best to you in the new year Splinters.
Cudos to you for seeing it through.
As the new year starts... so do the new possibilities buddy. All the best to you in the new year Splinters.
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Beautiful work sir.
Best wishes for next year and your new endeavors after teaching.
Spend more time at U3DA!
Best wishes for next year and your new endeavors after teaching.
Spend more time at U3DA!
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Let's see, 'you don't tug on Superman's cape' and
'you don't tug on Doris's purse'.
(writes note to self'...
wonderful story telling and artistry! enjoyed it!

'you don't tug on Doris's purse'.
(writes note to self'...
wonderful story telling and artistry! enjoyed it!
Walk by faith, not by sight.
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Thanks for the comments guys (yes, even you Saul). I still have one more project to complete/develop then its onto something new.
I still pop in here from time to time but work got the better of me over the last few years so progress was slow. Good to see some old faces (names) still around here.
I have tried other software (Sketchup is a standard in the classroom) but nothing offers me the familiarity and ease of use that tS does. I have not yet come across anything mechanical or organic that I cant make with the program so, for that reason, I plan to continue using it for the foreseeable future.
I still pop in here from time to time but work got the better of me over the last few years so progress was slow. Good to see some old faces (names) still around here.
I have tried other software (Sketchup is a standard in the classroom) but nothing offers me the familiarity and ease of use that tS does. I have not yet come across anything mechanical or organic that I cant make with the program so, for that reason, I plan to continue using it for the foreseeable future.
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All the DSD books are now on itunes including a trilogy version with all three titles in one story.
I made a new sampler book as well which is free to download. Thats imminent.
I made a new sampler book as well which is free to download. Thats imminent.








































