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ranger0101 · Post by **ranger0101** » 19 Feb 2013, 18:28

Just the beginning... Lots to do...

Want to make the cave look bigger...

Want to make everything look bigger..

Draise · Post by **Draise** » 19 Feb 2013, 20:15

Looks good! Maybe a wider FOV would make it look bigger? A small person to scale?

Finis · Post by **Finis** » 20 Feb 2013, 01:12

Looks good. If I had discovered this place I'd be afraid to go onto to unstable structure but at the same time compelled even to go onto the leaning circle area. You captured two conflicting motives: survival vs adventure.

Cobble stones or other objects on the structure that seem to be for human use would give scale. The altar I'm guessing will be in the circle will do that too. When the structure has scale the cavern will inherit that effect. Cavern scale from textures or stalagmites/stalactites in foreground and background, depth of field, atmospherics.

ranger0101 · Post by **ranger0101** » 20 Feb 2013, 18:28

thanks guys for the great advice..

Here is another shot.. Still trying to get the feeling
rite before I star adding detail...

If you look rely close you can see a bunch of little
skeleton guys up on the top of the bridge..

Thanks

jamesmc · Post by **jamesmc** » 20 Feb 2013, 19:26

Love what you are doing here. It begs for a Edgar Allen Poe stanza or two.

ranger0101 · Post by **ranger0101** » 21 Feb 2013, 19:02

Thanks again for all the excellent comments..

Bob was the newest supervisor at JipCo. So when the lights went out
it fell upon him to go to the sub sub basement to reset the breaker switch. That was three months ago
and he hasn't been seen since.

ranger0101 · Post by **ranger0101** » 22 Feb 2013, 17:44

This may be the shot.

jamesmc · Post by **jamesmc** » 22 Feb 2013, 17:49

ranger0101 wrote:Thanks again for all the excellent comments..

Bob was the newest supervisor at JipCo. So when the lights went out
it fell upon him to go to the sub sub basement to reset the breaker switch. That was three months ago
and he hasn't been seen since.

Why do they always put the breaker switches in the basement. ;(

Fascinating interpretive art - am enjoying the view.

Finis · Post by **Finis** » 22 Feb 2013, 21:29

I like the view but the scale is lost where Lost_Temple_22_PS had scale. This is a view that would be awesome with depth perception.

Draise · Post by **Draise** » 22 Feb 2013, 22:23

Agreed, I like the angle from the 22, the second to last one.

ranger0101 · Post by **ranger0101** » 23 Feb 2013, 16:38

Thanks again for all the good advice...

Added some stalactites and some water...

ranger0101 · Post by **ranger0101** » 23 Feb 2013, 21:30

Better Shot Maybe...

ranger0101 · Post by **ranger0101** » 24 Feb 2013, 16:10

Better water...

Draise · Post by **Draise** » 24 Feb 2013, 18:04

I'm liking it a lot!!! The water is much better, the angle and composition is nice. I would probably lower the ambient lighting so it looks less like a super powerful flash on one monster camera (bring out the god-ray and the man more by putting in more contrast to the rest of the image)! But it's looking great!

ranger0101 · Post by **ranger0101** » 25 Feb 2013, 00:18

Made the water a little shallower.. Brought the Light down a bit..

ranger0101 · Post by **ranger0101** » 25 Feb 2013, 00:47

ok... Maybe that last one was a bit too dark...

ranger0101 · Post by **ranger0101** » 26 Feb 2013, 13:18

Well.. I think I'm done with this one..

Here is my final entry...

Thank You to everyone for all the helpful comments.

Cheers

-Tim-

Draise · Post by **Draise** » 26 Feb 2013, 13:55

It's great! Got a great vibe to it.

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