The fighter

darkmage
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The fighter

Post by darkmage »

hi everyone here a two versions of the same render.

the blue fire was added in Gimp.

Which do you think is best?

Please comment.

Thanks.

w fight2.JPG
w fight pp2.JPG
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Re: The fighter

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Even though the blue one is quite nice I prefer the simplicity of the first. Nice job! :bananathumb:
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Re: The fighter

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The fighter needs a different texture and colors for the blue fire one.

I like the white one better since the fighter texture and white work well together. Consider adding something simple, artistic, in the white area while keeping it open and uncluttered. Like those minimalist Japanese ink drawings. Something to tell a little more about the setting. Keep it grey scale.
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Re: The fighter

Post by darkmage »

thanks for the feedback you two.


@Finis
I'll give it a go.

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