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bitkar · Post by **bitkar** » 28 Apr 2010, 20:19

Hey, another project from me. Actually its a entry test for a job Iam trying to get. A company printing on diferent materials for the interior design.

this is for start, couple of hours of work. I will add some details, towels, lights at the mirror and so. Next step is maybe making the gaps more gray. Its not too big and complicated scene. I will have to tweek the lighting a little too, I supose. What do you think?

pugman 1 · Post by **pugman 1** » 29 Apr 2010, 08:48

Hi man, normaly the floor tiles should have grey joints
because when people walk on them they get dirty
very quik,the walls are ok in white.
looking good so far

bitkar · Post by **bitkar** » 29 Apr 2010, 20:21

thanks, nice suggestions... my next step, only few things to make:

bitkar · Post by **bitkar** » 30 Apr 2010, 18:24

another development, almost done.

ranger0101 · Post by **ranger0101** » 30 Apr 2010, 19:19

Hi Bitkar...

Nice modeling and lighting... But looks dangerous to me.. I would round to some degree the
top row of tiles surounding the tub and the exposed corner.. I would also put a mat on the floor beside the
tub... I would divide the thing above the tub into 6 pieces leaving overall size the same... or 3 pieces same
size as mirror... Then I would try to warm it up a bit.. maybe some pooling shaows that cover areas of tiles
that still let underlying shadows show through...

CHEERS
ranger0101

bitkar · Post by **bitkar** » 30 Apr 2010, 19:29

so, this should be final. Maybe I will add some things later, if there will be some spare time. But this should be sufficient. I will make two more vizuals for the potencial new job.

bitkar · Post by **bitkar** » 30 Apr 2010, 19:51

damn! light at the mirror is missing... i have to do one more :D

marcel · Post by **marcel** » 30 Apr 2010, 19:58

nice work. Here is some idea to enhance the final render:
The motif on the wall ceated by intense light (the sun throught a windows) is not aesthetic, too hard. The render would be better without this detail. you can replace it by a local light with the color of the sun to simulate a light from a transluscent glass.
The brown pipes at the right would be best with a white color.
The towel are too similar.
The mirror would be better if it stopped a tile above. the shelf above the valve would be more visible if it was on the tiles.
And the most important: a woman in the bath!

bitkar · Post by **bitkar** » 30 Apr 2010, 20:56

you are right, nothing to say, thanks

good idea with the point (sun)light

ps: I have some poser model that could fit the bath, maybe i will check it after all, just for fun :D

bitkar · Post by **bitkar** » 01 May 2010, 11:19

so, green tiles changed coloer a bit, mat on the floor, mirror, light above mirror, changed lighting.

bitkar · Post by **bitkar** » 01 May 2010, 12:30

final is here vi ... 78&start=0

bitkar · Post by **bitkar** » 01 May 2010, 16:35

next thing is carpet:

marcel · Post by **marcel** » 01 May 2010, 18:12

Good start. The flower vase is too small. should be a vase more design, longer (about 80 cm) and profile, colorless glass. Baseboard would be better with a white color.

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