Sci-fi shuttle

User avatar
xtetra
Petty Officer Second Class
Posts: 34
Joined: 22 May 2009, 05:35

Sci-fi shuttle

Post by xtetra »

Doing this as part of a project with my step-son. Thought I'd post it for comments/crits.

One thing I need to figure out is the "7" uv decal projects from the top to the bottom of the main body. This would be OK with me except its backwards on the bottom. I guess I'll have to split this bit of geometry in two top and bottom to fix? I know I could UV map but I'm really not good with that yet. (Working on it though...kind of on a deadline to spend too much time on it at the moment.)

I may make a few changes such as larger vertical stabilizers but I am trying to keep the geometry as simple as possible.

Any comments greatly appreciated. Thanks!
Attachments
test06.png
User avatar
xtetra
Petty Officer Second Class
Posts: 34
Joined: 22 May 2009, 05:35

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by xtetra »

A little farther along.
Attachments
test10.jpg
Jack Edwards
Senior Chief Petty Officer
Posts: 181
Joined: 22 May 2009, 04:28

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by Jack Edwards »

Looks pretty good, xetra :bananathumb:

I see you toned down the color on the 7 decal. It may still be a bit too clean compared to the rest of the ship. It'd likely be even better if it as worked into the texture so that you could weather it to match the hull.
No booleans were used in the mangling of this message... :?

YafaRay for trueSpace Project

(Current version: v0.7.0)

trueSpacePlugins.com
theuns
Lieutenant Junior Grade
Posts: 868
Joined: 10 Jun 2009, 11:21
Type the number ten into the box: 0
Location: South Africa

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by theuns »

very nice xtetra :)

some geometry suggestions... enlarge the fins some more and slap some on the dorsal side as well, bigger or smaller than the top ones and more slanted, would look way kewl IMHO!

also, you said it was a shuttle, what kind of shuttle? passenger cargo?

if passenger, add some windows, either just face painted black squares or sphere bulges or even pods like protrusions sticking out of the hull that carry the passengers...

if it is cargo, why no plug some cargo containers onto the dorsal and/or ventral fins...

like the look so far, perhaps some attitude adjuster thrusters for manoeuvring in space? landing struts, access hatches and ramps?

just throwing ideas around, see if they work for you, ignore if not ;)

but above all... HAVE FUN! :D
theuns - tSer since 2000
.:| http://theunsfvo.cgarena.com/" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false; |:.
.:| http://bluestarcreations.wordpress.com/" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false; |:.
User avatar
xtetra
Petty Officer Second Class
Posts: 34
Joined: 22 May 2009, 05:35

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by xtetra »

theuns,

Thanks for your comments...some good ideas there which I'll make use of in the near future as I think I'll be working on this design sooner rather than later. I'd like to do a sort of "walk around" anim of it sitting in a hangar bay or something similar.

Right now I'm setting up the path for three of these in an animation which I hope to run over the weekend.

At the moment everything is being done in model space. I'd like to make use of workspace but I found texturing different enough to slow me down and right now I want to crank this out. Perhaps I'll remodel in WS so I can try the real time render engine out.
theuns
Lieutenant Junior Grade
Posts: 868
Joined: 10 Jun 2009, 11:21
Type the number ten into the box: 0
Location: South Africa

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by theuns »

only fiddled with workspace a little bit but haven't looked into it properly yet, like you, i want to crank out things quickly and don't have a lot of spare time to thoroughly learn new stuff now...

look forward to seeing more ;)
theuns - tSer since 2000
.:| http://theunsfvo.cgarena.com/" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false; |:.
.:| http://bluestarcreations.wordpress.com/" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false; |:.
User avatar
xtetra
Petty Officer Second Class
Posts: 34
Joined: 22 May 2009, 05:35

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by xtetra »

Used a few older models in conjunction with this one for the following shot which is just one part of what will eventually be about a 90 second anim. Not satisfied with it yet so will do some editing of object paths and perhaps add some more ships. Comments appreciated.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jfu-IaaKFAM"
Mr. 3d

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by Mr. 3d »

NICE ! 8-) ...I like your planet's atmosphere...it makes for a nice journey in space...trueSpace !
theuns
Lieutenant Junior Grade
Posts: 868
Joined: 10 Jun 2009, 11:21
Type the number ten into the box: 0
Location: South Africa

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by theuns »

hi xtetra, could you perhaps upload it to liveleak.com or send it to me if it isn't too big? I can't access youtubes :(
theuns - tSer since 2000
.:| http://theunsfvo.cgarena.com/" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false; |:.
.:| http://bluestarcreations.wordpress.com/" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false; |:.
User avatar
xtetra
Petty Officer Second Class
Posts: 34
Joined: 22 May 2009, 05:35

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by xtetra »

Is there a cap on file sizes we can post here? The anim is a about 7.5 MB so I could upload it when I get home.
Karthogen
Master Chief Petty Officer
Posts: 454
Joined: 03 Jun 2009, 14:12

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by Karthogen »

I beleiveyou have to ZIP anamations before uploading them, or you can always post it to You tube and add the link.

Save server space.
User avatar
ranger0101
Master Chief Petty Officer
Posts: 363
Joined: 22 May 2009, 13:15
Type the number ten into the box: 0
Location: Orrville Ohio U.S.A.

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by ranger0101 »

Rely nice work xtetra!!

File size limit is 4 meg...

Keep up the good work

Cheers

ranger0101
In order to Create Art... You must first learn to See...
My Website http://www.theartoftimkoons.yolasite.com
Mr. 3d

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by Mr. 3d »

xtetra...you just had your video loaded on Prodigy's YouTube viewing site last night (that's how I saw it), but now you have removed it and posted a separate link ? Theuns can view it here if you re-post it back on Prodigy's YouTube link (I would think ?).
User avatar
xtetra
Petty Officer Second Class
Posts: 34
Joined: 22 May 2009, 05:35

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by xtetra »

Not sure what you mean, I uploaded it to my youtube page:

http://www.youtube.com/user/xtetra"

This was the original link I posted:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jfu-IaaKFAM"

In any case, I've attached it in a rar file here
User avatar
xtetra
Petty Officer Second Class
Posts: 34
Joined: 22 May 2009, 05:35

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by xtetra »

At any rate, thanks all to those of you who posted comments and encouragement. Going to make some modifications now and render again as soon as possible.
Mr. 3d

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by Mr. 3d »

This is what I was talking about...

User avatar
xtetra
Petty Officer Second Class
Posts: 34
Joined: 22 May 2009, 05:35

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by xtetra »

Gotcha...well whatever I did it was by accident. :oops: :? Will try and post anims that way in the future.

Thanks!
Jack Edwards
Senior Chief Petty Officer
Posts: 181
Joined: 22 May 2009, 04:28

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by Jack Edwards »

BTW, if you guys render the animation with YafaRay4tS, you're welcome to upload the animation to the Gallery there and link the thread. I've set the file upload size for 20MB. ;)
No booleans were used in the mangling of this message... :?

YafaRay for trueSpace Project

(Current version: v0.7.0)

trueSpacePlugins.com
Nez
Petty Officer Third Class
Posts: 11
Joined: 28 May 2009, 12:22

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by Nez »

Mr. 3d wrote:This is what I was talking about...
some of us can't see that either - I just get a blank space rather than an embedded vid - and my access rights here don't allow me to access youtube or other streaming video sites, so attached zips are pretty much my best hope of seeing animations... have to check whether I've got software for opening .rar....
User avatar
Steinie
Captain
Posts: 2958
Joined: 21 May 2009, 17:38
Type the number ten into the box: 10

Re: Sci-fi shuttle

Post by Steinie »

For a RAR file I use this one...it is FREE!

http://www.7-zip.org/"

Return to “Work in Progress”